Topic sentence - Our bones are made of three different substances.
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Example - The three different layers of your bones are the cortical bone, spongy bone and bone marrow.
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Xplain further - In the centre of our bones is the bone marrow. Bone marrow produces blood cells. The outer layer is called the cortical bone. The cortical bone is hard, strong and smooth. Below the cortical bone, is the spongy bone. The spongy bone is also hard and strong. It is lighter than the cortical bone.
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Tie up - To eat and drink calcium helps keep your bones strong.
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Reflection - I wish I realised that I did one with the teacher, because I ended up doing three!
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